Black Diamante Fish Hair Combs Could You Please Read And Critique My Poems?

Could you please read and critique my poems? - black diamante fish hair combs

Tanka
The stars in the sky
Black gloss on canvas
While in bed I lie,
Display of harmony,
May humanity strives


Terse Verse
When I walk in the park, the doves flying in the sky.
Once. Crap.


Diamond
Sharks
Rough, funny
Swimming, Soaring, hunting
These animals are misunderstood
On spying, maneuvering Diving
Offset fascinating
Fish


Thank you!